为什么雅思G类写作总是卡在5.5？

官方数据显示，中国考生G类写作平均分长期停留在5.5，核心症结在于任务回应不完整与语言机械套用。很多申请人把A类模板直接搬到G类，导致信件语气生硬、信息缺漏。要突破6分，必须先理解G类评分标准中的“purpose”与“tone”两项隐性要求。

雅思移民写作评分标准深度拆解

1. Task Achievement：移民官到底想看到什么？

• 完全覆盖 bullet points：三个提示点必须各用独立段落回应，缺一不可。
• 目的清晰：在开头一句直接说明写信意图，例如“I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with…”
• 细节可信：虚构内容需符合常理，如投诉酒店就写“the air-conditioning emitted a loud noise after 11 p.m.”

2. Coherence & Cohesion：逻辑衔接的隐藏得分点

高分信件常用指代+替换技巧避免重复。示例：

低分：The room was dirty. The room was also *** all.
高分：The room was dirty. Moreover, the space was so cramped that two suitcases could not fit.

雅思G类小作文万能结构（投诉信示例）

Dear Sir or Madam,
Paragraph 1：目的+背景
I am writing to raise a formal complaint regarding the laptop (Order No. 12345) that I purchased from your online store on 15 May 2024.

Paragraph 2：问题细节1
Firstly, the product description promised a 14-inch screen; however, the unit delivered has a 13.3-inch display.

Paragraph 3：问题细节2+影响
Secondly, the battery drains within two hours of normal use, which severely disrupts my work-from-home schedule.

Paragraph 4：诉求+时限
I would appreciate a full refund or a replacement dispatched within seven working days. Should this not be resolved, I will have no choice but to escalate the matter to the Consumer Council.

Yours faithfully,
Li Wei

如何针对不同话题快速换皮？

求职信替换模块

把投诉信框架中的“问题细节”替换成技能+成就：

• Instead of “the battery drains…” → “During my three-year tenure at ABC Logistics, I reduced delivery errors by 18% through implementing a barcode system.”

友情信替换模块

把正式语气改为半正式+情感词汇：

• Dear Sir or Madam → Dear John
• I would appreciate → It’d be great if you could

常见失分陷阱自查表

7天冲刺计划（每天30分钟）

1. Day1-2：背诵并默写上述模板框架，确保格式零失误。
2. Day3-4：用真题库中的三种不同话题（投诉、请求、建议）各写一封信，限时20分钟。
3. Day5：对照评分标准自评，重点标红未回应的bullet point。
4. Day6：找同伴互换批改，只改逻辑衔接，不改语法。
5. Day7：模拟考试环境完成一篇，使用官方答题纸，训练字迹与段落缩进。

高分词汇与短语清单（按场景分类）

投诉场景

• I am compelled to express my di *** ay
• This falls short of the advertised standard
• As a loyal customer for over five years, I feel let down

求职场景

• My enclosed CV attests to my progressive experience in…
• I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience

实战QA：考官最反感的套话有哪些？

问：开头能否用“I am penning this epistle”显得高级？
答：移民类写作强调清晰沟通，penning this epistle过于陈旧，直接扣分。

问：结尾能否写“Your prompt reply will be highly appreciated”？
答：该句已被滥用，可替换为I look forward to your resolution within the stipulated timeframe。

如何利用剑桥真题进行逆向拆解？

步骤：

1. 选Cambridge 16 Test 1 Section 1，先遮住范文，自己写15分钟。
2. 对照范文，用不同颜色标出衔接词、同义替换、语气词。
3. 把范文翻译成中文，再隔天回译成英文，对比差异。
4. 将差异点整理成个人“升级库”，下次写作强制使用至少3条。

最后提醒：移民官视角看写作

移民官并非语言专家，他们更关注信息是否完整、诉求是否合理、语气是否礼貌。一封6.5分的信件，往往没有复杂句型，却能让读者在30秒内抓住重点。记住：简单准确＞华丽空洞。